The sun behind sorrow

Sorrow remembers sweet present joy

but as the moon can cover the sun

and borrow its light at night

so love always shines behind sorrow

ready to take you home

to the realm of joy and peace

where you can rest in ease...





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-01-20 at 15:42

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
I always take time to read your poetry - and this is the reason why. Very effective.

Regards,
John.
2011-01-06



Wonderful! Lovely! Beautiful and so true!
2010-12-11



Wonderful! Lovely! Beautiful and so true!
2010-12-11



amazing...that was so flowing..and so emerged through me..I so loved the truth revealed here with so much mildness..
yet this truth differs between a life and another ..my sorrow rises as the sun sets and that moon borrows its light..for its when all creatures sleep on peace..yet one eye dives in reality of which only under the moon light can b faced.

Well done
thnx, am inspired a lot
2010-02-10


Janine>K
in time of sorrow it is really difficult to think of happy memories. it even makes me sader to think of happy times when I am sad. but this poem makes me feel positive today. thanx for this sunny poem:-)

great work
2010-02-07


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting poem , thoughtful written and well expresst . Got me to thinking. Happy memory's can out shine both the sun and mood. Though times and life resembles a hurricane , or worse , love et all we have had in our mindsstill have , we can smile at the happy memory.
Ken ( D Williams )
2010-01-20