an appology to the women i have had the good fortune to b blessed in meeting and advice to any young man not to follow in my footsteps.


regrets

never had trouble in catching hearts
in keeping them not the same
I have blessed to have been loved by so many
but still i am alone again

wo many women that i have let down
when i have wanted to move on
and now they are no longer around
other men in ther hearts stand

so to any younge man reading
believe me when i say
dont make the same mitakes as i
it is no fun in any way

first u hurt the women
but they will get over u, and find anouther who`ll stay
but one day u will wake up, & find
you are the lonely one today.....





Poetry by allinone
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Written on 2005-07-16 at 22:19

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
this is very good. catching hearts and keeping them... two very different things, as you have well learned... and taught. this is beautiful.

~StillHoppin
2005-07-17


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a good poem though there are some typos in there

wo many women - i assume is so.
younge - young
mitakes - mistakes

plus i am not liking the word you being cut down to 'u' in poetry, if sent to a publisher they would bin it. sorry if i sound harsh with that, but i believe if you are going to use language either do it one way or another with wording either cut down all the words or use the proper ones.
2005-07-16