a great lose


Uncle Teddy

You was so happy in your food and war bits,
Making fun out of my dad was the best bit.
Always walking round didn't care what anybody thinks,
You never ever cared if you was about to sink.

Waking up then was a cheer to see you,
Waking up now is A cry just to see you.

Your flat was always a mess,
But I loved you and I didn't care less.
Always going on about grubs,
But you never did make it to be a hub.

Waking up then was a cheer to see you,
Waking up now is a cry just to see you.

You moved in with us but was the same you,
You always forgot my friends and you would say who?
Always finding penny's on the floor,
But you didn't care because it wasn't no law.

Waking up then was a cheer to see you,
Waking up now is a cry just to see you.

That horrible thing took you away,
But ill never forget you, no way.
I still love you to this very day,
Ill hold onto your gifts come what may.

Waking up then was a cheer to see you,
Waking up now is a cry just to see you.... xXx



Poetry by FrannieXxX
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Written on 2010-03-04 at 10:25

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Awwwwww I Can Remember Him In Nottingham When He Was Making Fun Of Me :-/
2010-03-08


FrannieXxX
i thought i would have something to remember him by :)
2010-03-04


Jaydee x.x
I love this poem.
Really shows your emotions.
This is so sweet x.x
2010-03-04


The toe nail
That was a really good peom
makes the toe nails look like crap :P
2010-03-04