Another brilliant thought by the great ZaK! haha just kidding......but still brilliant!


Ripples Of Life

Every moment, every action,
every choice made and done

Effects the outcome of every life,
of everyone

The actions made effect all lives,
In ways that all can see and,
realize

Because most lives are lived,
just lived,
with only worries and woes,
not true thoughts,
true feelings,
known rarely to many souls

My life alone effects you now,

These words you read and remember,
may effect you some how

Even as small as a lost penny,
discovered by a child,
to spark an imagination let wild

No life goes wasted,
if another it had touched

Success in one of its many faces,
is life that lived and from it transformed,
another life that lived and lived to form




Poetry by ZaK
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Written on 2006-02-24 at 03:19

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Ian
i liked it man. thats pretty good me id have to say a five. nice one man.
2006-02-25


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Fantastic imagination and good use of imagery, I'm impressed and hope you keep the efforts up.
2006-02-24


PoeticProcrastination
I like this poem...haha, yes, it is brilliant, but don't go getting bigheaded, you've only been here a short while! ;} Haha, partially kidding, it's good to be proud of your work...nice write!
2006-02-24


Mary
hey i have a wild imagination and i'm not a total child! still a very good poem!
2006-02-24