A sad description of what the last moments of life might be like.....


Last Moments


So confused,

thougts a swirling,

my body curling,

cold rushing through,

the thoughts consuming,

motions not blooming,

a dazing stare,

lost in breathless air,

the days have stopped,

the thoughts have dropped,

my time is done,

no time to run



Poetry by ZaK
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Written on 2006-02-24 at 04:04

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Very good Zach. I liked it a lot
2006-03-10


CherryFairy
I agree. There's this feeling, after reading it, of just, "OH MY GOD! I HAVE SO MUCH TO DO!!!" You're a brilliant writer.
2006-02-28


PoeticProcrastination
BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! Somehow manages to flow smoothly even while projecting the lost, hopeless, incoherent feelings that might occur before one succumbs to the throes of death. Excellent!
2006-02-24


Mary
gah! you thought of that in like five seconds?!?! not fair!!!
2006-02-24