Still Becoming Apart


While the night is getting darker

and another day is whished away.


In our minds we compose the question

never ment to be pronounced.


Will we ever find the heart

or will it be just nothing there in the end?











Poetry by Elise
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Written on 2010-06-28 at 14:25

Tags Apart  Heart  End 

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what I love about your writings..is ur ability to send your message in one word as much as in 100.. in few lines u touch a minds wisdom and hearts beat.. i do love this piece cause reminds me if that i wonder about..

gr8 job
keep it up
2010-07-13



what I love about your writings..is ur ability to send your message in one word as much as in 100.. in few lines u touch a minds wisdom and hearts beat.. i do love this piece cause reminds me if that i wonder about..

gr8 job
keep it up
2010-07-13


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I like this.
2010-06-28