Inspired by Butterfly's "What my silent heart screams."
in particular the last line.

~L.~


Rose-Tinted No Longer


pieces, a million, missing
from a once whole heart,
for clothed as sheep a wolf;
deception planned from the start.

Lies, so easy, protrayed as truth
dangled like a worm on a hook,
irresistibly sugar-coated, then
cruelly this heart you took.

mistrust comes now so easierly
to one once innocently pure,
love no longer rose-tinted thanks
to this pain you make me endure.

15/07/10



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-07-15 at 11:29

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Life......we keep living. Transformed......a new birth....anew. We grow to love and in love we suffer for the pains of mandkind seems immature for so many...except nature which is balanced as well as faithful to it's surroundings. Wonderful by all means!
2010-07-30


Butterfly
I was so surprised to see that my poem inspired you to write another one. Thanks and this is a great poem as well.

If you are on facebook please add me as a friend and take part in the "poem a day for 30 days challenge" I have running. If you want more info on it please feel free to email me at venessa.atson@sanlam.co.za - my work email add. PLEASE put my name in the subject box (group email)

Wow this is so great. Always nice reading your emails.

V
2010-07-26