Caramel Summer






The first boy I kissed,

our teeth clashed,

trickier than it looked

I thought,

worried about tooth enamel

he tasted of caramel

and beach winds.

We sat on windy steps

held hands.

I swam like a fish

lost him in the froth'

resurfacing, we watched

dolphins following mackeral sholes.

Sunset dancing, so close

what I thought was his belt buckle

dug into my pelvis.

The summer of my first kisses

snaked along

drawing hearts in the sand,

I worried about enamel

and the sweetness of caramel.



Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-07-23 at 21:12

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NicholasG
Summer time, and the livin' is easy...
To return to that place underlines the bliss of being ignorant of the complexities of the world. I wonder if I should work on the time machine or the fountain of youth first?
xox Nick, (the sane one) :-)
2010-07-25


Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
Summer love - what sweet memories, I really enjoyed reading this poem, I felt priveleged to share these secret moments of young love. Beautifully sculpted. I have a similarly-themed porm 'awakening'. I think you have handled the theme so very, very well, and I can taste the caramel...thanks...
2010-07-25


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm rushing out right now to buy some caramel

lovely poem

xxx Stan
2010-07-24



A sweet poem of a sweet memory. Brought back a few memories of my own. Sweet.

jim
2010-07-24


Rob Graber
I like the flavor!
:-,?
2010-07-23