Just feeling a little apathetic.


I Should, Should I?


I should talk to myself,
scold and chivvy
along my dormant soul,
motivate, disagree, debate.

Stale thoughts linger,
crumbs litter
the armchair of my mind
sitting easy.

Should I message myself?
email ideas?
phone a friend?
or is apathy, the end?








Poetry by shells
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Written on 2010-08-23 at 23:58

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Commentally Ill
i love the bit about the armchair. me? i have a mental sofa, so i don't even have to go to the trouble of sitting up.

:)
2013-05-13


John Ashleigh
This tells me to motivate myself. Thankyou for sharing - your poetry is very good.

Regards,
John.
2010-11-25


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
I get a mix between "ah what's the use, anyway" and "I don't care" kind of feelings from this. I liked the thought of wondering

"Should I message myself?
email ideas?"

It sums up the apathetic moment described, in my view. I enjoy your style of writing. Thanks.
2010-10-14


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
one must slob :)
it is not apathy shells
its thinking
trust me :))

we are only productive if we have time.
2010-08-31


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2010-08-29


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Put the kettle on ,
Make a good cup of tea,
Think , as you sup ,
The British way ,
Well it woks fore me!
Ken (:-))
2010-08-24