The Other Women


You came into my dream
yet again
Maybe my unconcious have wondered how youve been
If you do something
What goes on in your life
What are you thinking

You came into my dream
yet again
Wondering have I broke my pattern
or am I back at square one again

Is it because I love it's beginning
and doesnt know the end
that drives me into the arms
to be or become a lover
a lover in a pattern
back at square one

When the pattern goes from great to dreadfull
you know deep down
the road that you abroad
was a wrong turn
And now all that I do is looking for something
something that could make me strong
to get out of the pattern
called square one




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-03-06 at 16:45

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...bad place to be that square one , even though one never seems to learn that at that very place square one the progress may only be within the confines of that shapely prison square one which simply means the progress is squaredly null...

...love the work you put into this...
2006-03-06


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Using the turns at the road and the pattern 'back to square one' for real life uses, is metaphorical in it's own way, and metaphorical language is probably the best to use for imagery.

The language you used was brilliant and such a simple structure.!
2006-03-06