"Well, I can’t tell till I’ve seen you over a distance of ground.
  You’ve got a touch of class, but I don’t know how far you can go."
         &nb


Private Screening

My only view of her is darkly through

The filmy lens of her bedroom window,

Backlit by a low light beside her bed,

The frame of reference a dim black

And white of distance and deception,

Too small to be certain of more than

The shadowy intimacy of  bare shoulders,

The soft sighing her gown must make

As she crosses stage-left to stage-right,

Sultry in silk and smoke, blonde as

The film noir goddess whose name

I never remember, more mysterious

And desirable for my not knowing,

In love with her flickering image,

The sudden dark denouement.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2010-11-13 at 15:31

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Almost mystical and very drawing in a sepia haze (perhaps), quite vouyeristic in its pleasure. Applauded.
2010-11-15


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last line, which shuts off so abruptly as the light it's describing.
2010-11-14



You can never go too far.
The worst you can do it not to go at all.

Noir goes well with this dreary winter weather.
It warms me in a rather interior way.

Thanks for the heat.
jim
2010-11-13