Bubbles of thoughts

Thoughts appear like bubbles in the water of awareness

 

The thought "I think" is just another bubble

 

that comes and disappears again

 

just like bubbles in a glass of soda

 

Silent awareness

 

is

 

 the unchanging constant





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-11-30 at 19:51

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countryfog
Very effective simile. I've thought of 'thoughts' in a flowing sense too as ripples, opening and extending, but bubbles impart an animation that is more true.
2010-12-01


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Amazing! Truly a piece of art!*applause!* Thank you for a lovely reading experience:)
2010-12-01


John Ashleigh
A brilliant metaphorical poem. Works very well. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!

Regards,
John.
2010-11-30