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Searching the eyes where the senses fail
Where faces fear, where hides the tail.
Where shows not the surface what inside lies
In caverns most holy, a sanctuary of ties

And there do I find, among treasures galore
The true face of you among the legendary lore
And I urge thee to wear it on thy sleeve like a glove
And give this fine planet a real diamond to love




Poetry by CrowRider
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Written on 2010-12-08 at 22:09

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
A pleasure to read. The wording is deep, and the mood is literally fantastic. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-09


shells
I think you are indeed wearing your heart on your sleeve. This piece flows so well and great final line.
2010-12-08