“A man no longer what he was, nor yet the thing he’d planned”
- Edna St. Vincent Millay, “If Still Your Orchards Bear”



River Poem

Not yet a man nor ever to be a poet,
Unplanned, I came in early evening
Down a steep path to the river's edge

Through trees overhanging the bank
Where last light in the lattice of limbs
Dappled the brown water like a fawn,

The slow current wrapping around
A cottonwood branch canoeing quietly
Past me, the deep light lifting its body

In a glint of gold leaves on the water.
On the opposite shore, an old cabin
On a hillside overlooking the river

Hung from a frayed ribbon of smoke.
Downriver, drifting, a rowboat burned
In setting sun and sank out of sight.

Fifty years the poem and I have waited
In the light on the water, the smoke
Above the hill . . . we wait there still.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-01-15 at 17:21

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Look over yonder on another hill,
glimpse at my waiting figure
and wave my way as I wave back.
2011-01-21


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Again you paint with words in ways I've never encountered before. Unfortunately the poet's art is all too often seen as less than that of the painter/artist. This work would grace the wall of a premier art gallery.


Joe
2011-01-16


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Now, we've seen you, cabin, smoke, man...and poet. Very nicely written, Fog.
2011-01-16



A remarkable poem and a remarkable series of images. One in particular, need I say which one, stands out as . . . simply brilliant.

This is a poem worth the wait.
2011-01-16