While She Sleeps

Moonlight on the kitchen window
Seeps around the old mullions,
Froths on the sill, dribbles down
The wall, puddles on the floor,
Pours a path to where she dreams,
And refills the kitten's empty bowl.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-01-16 at 14:31

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Christin Brennan
This poem is like butter...your fellow commenters were very much right when they told you how sweet the imagery richochets in the head after the last line!

cheers,
christin
2011-01-20


Nancy Sikora
Beautiful imagery. I especially like the image of the moonlight filling the bowl.
2011-01-17


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2011-01-17


sana
Beautifully written !
2011-01-16


Libyan Rose
lovely poem.thanks for share it us
2011-01-16


shells
The poem just whispers on the page and takes me there, lovely.
2011-01-16


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
What a softly wonder filled dream picture! No painter could capture the magic you put into this poem.
Bravo!

Joe
2011-01-16