Three Tanka on a Theme of Light and Shadow

This empty fountain
Flowing only with shadows
Where the water was
Two mermaids poised in mid-air
Bathe in ripples of bronze light


The yellow streetlamps
One by one flickering on
In deep snowy dusk
Each light opening shadows
In the windows of closed shops


When one lives alone
One hears Death in the silence
And from the shadows
The solemn dark mourners come
And cover all the mirrors





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-03-17 at 16:45

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A gem with four beautiful facets, each flashing.
2011-03-20


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
I struggle to find unique words of encouragement and praise - but yet I just come up with how brilliant your imagery is. Really, you make my mind fill up with pictures and let memories flood. I can't thankyou enough, I am honoured to read your poetry. Keep writing, countryfog.

Regards,
John.
2011-03-18


Rob Graber
Nice work with the form; the final one is a great climax!
2011-03-17