Olusegun Akanbi
Great poem!I like the style!It is unconventional and novel.
2011-07-06

Ferenc Inigo Beck
I would humbly add my thanks for something truly unique.
2011-07-06

Rob Graber
This one brims with interesting imagery!
2011-07-05

Donald Thornton
This poem seems different to me than most I have read, I do like it, not sure I totally understand it all.
2011-07-04

Elle
I wanted to send you a private message about howI like this, but sadly I am not allowed to as I am no longer a paid up member.

good writing and thank you

Elle x
2011-05-17

karmic justice
I read this many times and the potency was never diminished...
2011-05-12

Bob
Great stuff!
2011-04-29

CrowRider
very strong imagery. you seem to focus on the visual a lot, and to great achievement also. well done :)
2011-04-28

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2011-04-27

DKdrayton
you are a kindred Soul, methinks...
2011-04-27

SecretWords
This one i will read over and over. The imagery in it has got me hooked.
2011-04-27

Kshiti Dubey
I agree with mayamiko. You paint with your words. It was as though I could see a silent movie playing in my mind :-). I liked it a lot.
2011-04-26

Mayamiko Seyani
I call this poetry. youhave a style that is unique and a very mature way of expression and right choice of diction! i like the part... Expect nothing from your merit,
Cavities tear into our limestone heart... U sure can do a painting with words. Nice piece. I loved it
2011-04-26

shells
I found this to be complex and expressive, to me it spoke of procrastination, a missed opportunity perhaps. I did wonder how the title came about, it drew me in.
2011-04-26

Nils Teodor
You write very well
with your own unique style
A pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing
2011-04-25

countryfog
Reading you I always know it's not going to sound like anyone else, and certainly no tired cliches. The originality of at least half a dozen lines here snapped my eyes open this morning "to extol the grace".
2011-04-25

ken d williams
If only love in all its forms was easy , then we'd all find it, rather than by mear chance , luck , stumbling upon it , thear asgain , by findeing love as we do , the lessons we learn or hope we do , on the road too finding love , kind of adds too the experiences we have.
A good poem , John , well written , so well exprest.
Ken.
2011-04-25

I can only sense the extreme enormity of freedom in the one case simultaneous with the inextricable imprisonment of another. If only life were a bit more fair and a bit more generous.
2011-04-25