Walking With Li Po

No sound but what the water makes

On what it touches . . .

Rain cascading through leaves,

Leaves dripping on maple wings

 

That float in spinning swirls

To churn the swollen stream

Choking on weeds and twigs

That it spits into its rushing

 

Deeper in the leaning shadows

Of cottonwoods, barely-rooted

Reeds bending like the water,

Like the notes of bamboo flutes;

 

And the slippery mossy rocks

That I cross to the other side

Where I turn to find the stream

Already healed of my trespass.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-05-13 at 15:51

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shells
Such observation translated into the peace of nature, your final stanza with its last line is stunning.
2011-05-15


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
So tranquil and warmly peaceful. I remember walks like this. I needed solitude to truly embrace them.

Wonderful stuff!

Thanks, my friend.

Joe
2011-05-13