"I am"

Do not think what you are

 

Know that you are

 

Feel the presence

 

of

 

 "I am"

 

Be this knowing 

 

Wherever you are going

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2011-06-25 at 00:15

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John Ashleigh
Strong wording with dynamic accuracy. The structure is clever, and helps the poem stand out to the reader. Brilliant. Thankyou for sharing such an accomplished poem. *applaud*

Regards,
John
2011-07-04


J Carbone
I like your symmetry.
2011-06-25