On the train


absorbed
in herself
she rode
both there
and back
without noticing
that she once
reached her target



Poetry by Onwards
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Written on 2011-08-08 at 23:00

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countryfog
Yes, what Jim said, exactly. It's something I greatly enjoy and appreciate about your writing, something few attempt and fewer succeed at.
2011-08-09



These few words create an entire tale. I like to fill in the blanks myself, so I like this very much.
2011-08-08