don't let someone make u fall down in to the fake hope.


foolish hope

D sunshine is shinin' when d cloud is not insight.
fear is vanishin' d long turbulence.
Running is fadin' d sensitivism.
Yet, d seeds cuddle d heart.

Life can be disorder without romantic balance of d nature.
% can be so complicated without d beauty of d heart.
Fragile form can be d excuse
Yet, it'll be back to d inner resolution

Let's hope d feelin' will be broken into pieces
Till those cannot be colided :....no more.................!!!
Thanks 4 d colorful lighta into d left hemisphere of d heart***
D book is closed till d dust covers it unseen
since d light is hidin' away when it is so dark.



Poetry by syarifah nur
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Written on 2011-08-18 at 17:22

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I would love to hear you read this aloud. An aural treat it would be. As it is, a richness of d lights.
2011-08-18



What a lovely, sincere piece, syarifah nur.
We are of one mind with regard to fake hope.
You paint a truly glorious picture here, and I love all the 'd's. They inspire me to read aloud, which makes for interesting effect!
Very beautiful; I look forward to more from you :>)
2011-08-18