I wrote this poem when my best friend died suddenly..this was my way to grieve,,everyone grieves in their own way,and writing gives me closure,thought to explain this poem..


GiViNg Of My HeArT

Giving from my heart is a part of loving
Giving from my heart is true to my soul
Giving from my heart is never a lie

Giving from my heart mends
a broken heart of a friend
who needs comfort and support

I give my best to love unconditionally
To give my gift of loving everyone
while they are still living
When they die it is to late
from life experiences
Not spending enough time
made me realize
Life is to damn short

It was the worst experience to lose a close friend
Someone you grew up with,telling of your first kiss
Life's first experiences,sharing everything
Your deepest of secrets.
A friend who always looked out for you
Is now gone..
Now that she is gone
I realize I need to give love more
Not to let time pass by

Giving of my heart I write today
To promise to always be true&honest
To think before I open my big mouth
Because I can say words that are unkind
At the moment when I am angered or saddened

I have realized my emotions and my feelings
Have had a impact on the way I have reacted
Everyday life,and the reality of her death
has affected me deeply

Giving my heart is part of loving
I am going to give my all
to do my best to love everyone

God as my witness if I ever
have said a hurtful word
It wasn't my intention..
Because I know in my heart

I am a good person






Poetry by workoutrules
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Written on 2011-08-20 at 07:27

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It takes a long time to come to terms with the fact that someone always taken for granted is gone from our lives forever. And it is courageous and true of you to understand that no-one and nothing should ever be taken for granted.

Lovely poem.

William
2011-08-20


Only1way2go
I thought this write was superb insight into your heart, and when you write from your heart, the poem doesn't need stability, just understanding. GREAT WORK!
2011-08-20



Well, this resonates!
Sadly, the peace dove lost a friend of ten years post hospital, due not to physical death but to psychological change. There was no rupture, simply a gradual drift.
But where a break occurs, may arise an opportunity. It is clear from this honest piece that the author knows this very well.
Applause!
2011-08-20