Please comment carefully, Many souls wait faithfully, If someone has written dully,
Avoid commenting truthfully, As it may hurt awfully, I request you prayerfully.



Invent not Vehement Comment



Comments that you make
Must not cause any ache

It must kindly rejuvenate
Helping a soul to ruminate

If words are sarcastic
You will called sadistic

You create a bad mood
As comments are rude

If your comments throw dirt
It will surely, severely hurt

Atmosphere turns unfriendly
The result will be costly

In case your comments heal
It will supply immense zeal

Comments that are highly jovial
Make living condition congenial

Avoid making adverse comments
If they bring zero improvements

Sensible comments achieve
By bad comments, all grieve.

mvvenkataraman

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Poetry by mvvenkataraman
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Written on 2011-08-20 at 17:12

Tags Sarcasm  Criticism  Cynicism 

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Excellent advice here, m/v/v.
And it inspires the peace dove to make the following statement: I do believe that in all my comments I have never deviated from the PoetBay Code of Conduct, just as I never broke any rules while at TPF.
From henceforth, I invite poets to message me privately if they would like me to comment on their work. And I shall be happy to oblige.
Thanks!
2011-08-20