Please comment carefully, Many souls wait faithfully, If someone has written dully,
Avoid commenting truthfully, As it may hurt awfully, I request you prayerfully.
Comments that you make
Must not cause any ache
It must kindly rejuvenate
Helping a soul to ruminate
If words are sarcastic
You will called sadistic
You create a bad mood
As comments are rude
If your comments throw dirt
It will surely, severely hurt
Atmosphere turns unfriendly
The result will be costly
In case your comments heal
It will supply immense zeal
Comments that are highly jovial
Make living condition congenial
Avoid making adverse comments
If they bring zero improvements
Sensible comments achieve
By bad comments, all grieve.
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Poetry by mvvenkataraman
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Written on 2011-08-20 at 17:12
Tags Sarcasm  Criticism  Cynicism 
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Avoid commenting truthfully, As it may hurt awfully, I request you prayerfully.
Invent not Vehement Comment
Comments that you make
Must not cause any ache
It must kindly rejuvenate
Helping a soul to ruminate
If words are sarcastic
You will called sadistic
You create a bad mood
As comments are rude
If your comments throw dirt
It will surely, severely hurt
Atmosphere turns unfriendly
The result will be costly
In case your comments heal
It will supply immense zeal
Comments that are highly jovial
Make living condition congenial
Avoid making adverse comments
If they bring zero improvements
Sensible comments achieve
By bad comments, all grieve.
mvvenkataraman
SEARCH mvvenkataraman IN GOOGLE OR YAHOO
Poetry by mvvenkataraman
Read 520 times
Written on 2011-08-20 at 17:12
Tags Sarcasm  Criticism  Cynicism 
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