Under the protective veil of the rain

your sadness, gets a place to rest
escape from the harshest rays of the sun
and the constant noice of streets.

You are sleeping by my side now
a moment between the evening and night

Tomorrow is another day
in the moment we are here.




Poetry by Onwards
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Written on 2011-08-21 at 20:39

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I also like the last two lines very much. There's a subtle paradox in that a human life seems to be measured by days, but is really just a brief moment in time.

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2011-08-21


countryfog
What a lovely and loving thought the last two lines are. I can't live it but I won't forget it.
2011-08-21