Not really one of my better poems, but i dont care, Im In Love,
and all i wanted to do, was describe our first date, lying beside eachother, forgetting the time, ill work more on it later but right now i thought someone might enjoy it!


OMG!!!!! I am in love!!!!!!

Heart pumping,

the world thumping,

my eyes locked,

vision blocked,

all I see,

is her eyes looking back at me,

Crystal blue,

like a room of tile,

traveling into a black isle,

As my thoughts are swirling,

and questions whirling,

like "is she just pretending"

"or is her decision still pending"

all I hear,

"Can we just stay here, lay here"

All questions wrong,

thoughts pro-long,

joy follows in,

and my reply,

"as long as you want,

for,

you are by my side"










Poetry by ZaK
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Written on 2006-03-19 at 15:32

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Zainab
I just love this poem of yours, It show you were reallly in love or in a lovely mood I enjoined welldone even if I'm too late
2006-05-29


SUPERJEW66
ALRIGHT ZAK YA MAN YOUZ BE GETTING IT ON!! WHOOO .... *sniff* *cough* just kiddn dude
2006-05-11


CherryFairy
AW! That's really cute!
And an amazing poem!
2006-03-31


IronicBanana
Once again, I feel bad because I'm am such a bad poet... You're really good with the rhyming in this poem and it is "laced with emotion"... VERY cute and VERY good!!!
2006-03-22


Morpheus
I think you have been bitten by the love bug. Good luck dude!
2006-03-22


Andy
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

How cute.
2006-03-19



This poem made me happy! Good luck with the love!
2006-03-19