Smiles are free today...


As March winds


Tickled the
Daff-o-dils,

And pollen
Sprayed it's
Surface,

The pond
Gleams
In
Springs'
Delight,

As tadpoles
Gather
At the
Waters
Edge,

And

Smiles
Are
Free
Today...





Poetry by Morpheus
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Written on 2006-03-20 at 23:50

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Troll
If they are free, then I'll take 2.

This feels alive with spring, a smiling happy thought that made me.... (what else?) smile.
2006-04-23


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A clever way to remind us all what we overlook while caught up in the struggle of life. Nature is full of smiles we just have forgotten how to see. A very good write.
2006-03-23


Marie
McDonalds drive-thru use to say on the board "Smiles are free". So one time my friend and I asked for one. The girl gave us one...must have been one of these day... :)
2006-03-22


Veld Cooper
Beautiful images and flow, dear friend. Most enjoyable!
2006-03-21


Zoya Zaidi
Trees bloom in full view,
Reeds sway,
Buds smile,
Birds chirp away...
Spring is here to stay...

((((hugs dear Morpheus, this is goes to my heart straight away)))))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-21


Jon Hanover
The structure itself, though I found it at first glance difficult. Makes perfect sense, I like the images and the disclaimer that it is ok to smile they are free today. Great poem.
2006-03-21