First Frost (tanka)

Crystal spider web

Two last asters crisp and curl

Shudder of needles

From the shivering pine boughs

The first frost flowers blossom





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-10-28 at 16:09

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Another excellent write, Mr Fog.
Each line conveys most satisfactorily the joy of the season, the last a pleasant reminder that, even in chillier temperatures, a hardy plant may flourish.
Applaudeth.
2011-10-28