Condolence

As if nothing had really changed

Again late afternoon light

Fading in the imperturbable pines.

This morning there was ice

On their needle-tips and the grass.

I am walking to think of

What I can possibly say to him now

Who has his mother to bury.

That I have done no less, and less well

Than he will, is cold comfort.

The forecast is for snow and it begins

With a few soft wet flakes

Hanging in the air as though unsure

They are in the right place.

I think of the woods growing colder,

A doe and fawn standing

In a quiet clearing, nose-to-nose,

Their breaths steaming 

In the still air, the doe licking snow

From the startled fawn's face.

I am not with them, do not see them,

But I know they are there.

Perhaps that is all I can say to him.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-12-05 at 19:53

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I've often felt as you so descriptively write in the first two thirds of your poem when confronted with the need or request to console and make some sense out of death.

Your compassionate allegory is wonderfully warm, soft, loving and embracing; much better than I've ever seen or heard before.

Joe
2011-12-06