FUNNY-LOOKING RABBIT

You're a funny-looking rabbit!
Tell me why you've come?

"I'm here to spread some wisdom,
and some knowledge all around!"

But you're face looks sad, so honest blue.
And those tears you've cried are humble too.

"The truth of life lies in these tears.
Embrace your tears and feel no fears!"

How come your sad?
A funny-looking creature like you?

"The world has gone mad.
And it's too late to start anew."

I am not sad and I'm part of this town.

"You are still young, but you will be let down."

But we cannot give up! Let's fight for the youth!
We need to nurish and infiltrate the truth!

"I've fought all my life, I'm tired, no strength.
It's time for this bunny's inescapable descent."


Then he was gone, this beauty so rare.
It's just inexplicable, it's just not fair.

So beauty has left, and here we are.
The day of doom are not that far.

Shall we abandon the rabbit, the youth of our time?
This funny-looking creature with fears just like mine?

Shall we embrace those fears - those loveable tears?
And let the world live through these demanding, harsh years?





Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-03-25 at 00:28

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This is an extremely good text. Brilliantly crafted. Delivering its message so powerfully. Really enjoyed this read. so it has to be bookmarked.
2006-03-27


Zoya Zaidi
Another powerful poem by you Dan, full of concern and compassion for mankind.
As always your anguished spirit shines through in your words.
You and only you can write with such clarity!
((((((Hugs Day)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-25


OnlyExpressive
First of all I have to say...this is a great poem! I love the way in which it was written, it brings accross such a strong message. Very original, very interesting... thumbs up to you!

Keep smilin'...and writing
2006-03-25