Taste You


I want to taste your eyes
Just to se if they're as good as they looks
to reach your depth
Glittering eyes

I want to taste your smell
Just to se if it is as arousing as it smells
to catch your soul
Arousing smell

I want to taste your skin
Just to se if it is as soft as I feel
to feel you
Soft skin

I want to taste your soul
Just to se if it has the beauty you've shown
to se the beauty
Glittering soul

I want to taste your heart
Just to se if it is as big as I know
The heart of you
Beautiful heart

I want to taste your lips
Just to feel the feelings you give to me
the feeling of love
captures me




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-03-25 at 10:34

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Zoya Zaidi
That would make a one hell of a delicious meal.
I wish I could feast like that on my beloved.
Mmmmm! It would really be sumptuous!

(((Hugs Malin for a very, very romantic piece with subtle erotica to it, almost your trade mark by now!)))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Malin you really did the trick here
and speaking as a Brit your English is lovely keep it as it is, it makes for the heartfelt genuine feeling in the poem what the guy refers to is arousing

i have used the concept of taste and smell in my poem An Awesome love posted on this site rgds
2006-03-25


Jon Hanover
Apart from the spelling errors, a great poem. Would like to see some poems on the other senses approached like taste was on this one.
2006-03-25