Sublimation

A smile, a look
A glimpse, a gesture
A fragrant breeze
A feeling floating in the air
A sensation discreet

What was it?
That drew me to you,
What was it?

Vibes stirred
Moments cared
Slowly the meaning
Descends

Dewdrops condense...

Gradually the sensation
Shared acquires
A new sense

A flower blooms...

Heart and consciousness
Go hand in hand
Understandings new
Commence

First drop of rain on parched earth falls...

A whisper, a word
A secret shared
A mystery new
Unraveled
A veil lifted
A feeling dawned

Dewdrop changes into pearl...

A touch, a caress
Drowning
Sinking

Raindrops intermingle with the storm...

Passion, effervescence,
Tumult, storm
Consumed

Drops drown into ocean deep...

Elation
Ecstasy

Drops evaporate
From ocean deep into air,
Heat energy changes form
From form to formlessness...

Sublimation...



Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-03-25 at 18:26

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Teala
This gave me chills and I felt peaceful, lovely!
2006-04-10


GB
Thought all below me have said how I feel ... a GOOD read well penned from a pure heart and mind . My proses are so different 2 yours , but enjoy reading yours for inspiration . Well done ! .... G ( Hope to be writing another 1 myself soon ... think I have writers block ..... lol ! )
2006-03-30


Veld Cooper
Beautiful, as always, dear Zoya!
2006-03-27


Daybreaker
The dewdrops turn into pearls as elegantly as your words crawl into my heart!
2006-03-26


Rune Ljungberg
A model of excellence as all your works, none excluded.
2006-03-26


Feiyn
Your poem is seething passion and details. Excellent. Love your format! It added to the uniqueness of the poem.
2006-03-26


Cuddly Fox
what can i say but as always your words bring this fox to prick his ear up
2006-03-25


she
Hey Zoya....I'm still having a thousand thoughts about this poem.I like where it goes:
What was it?
That drew me to you,
What was it?

Then it brings to mind "The warrior of Romance" by Rik.Bravo girl.As always,you've stolen the show again.
2006-03-25


Alexander
How beautiful Zoya! Incredible poem! Keep ut the good work:)


Love from Alex:)
2006-03-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
you have a beautiful way with words Zoya and such a clever way of forming the stanzas. I was interested in this format can you advise what it is called
rgds mike
2006-03-25