But in contentment I still feel

The need of some imperishable bliss.

     Wallace Stevens, “Sunday Morning”




Bedroom Eyes (Pantoum Challenge)

She feels him undressing her with his eyes

As she combs and brushes her loosened hair,

Lays down the silvered mirror and shivers,

He aroused, thinking of her desire for him.

 

As she combs and brushes her loosened hair

It is the other he she recalls and the passion  

He aroused, thinking of her desire for him,

Need she's never known with the waiting he.

 

It is the other he she recalls and the passion

As she is pulled to the bed in the embrace of

Need she's never known with the waiting he,

The longing he'll never see in her bedroom eyes,

 

As she is pulled to the bed in the embrace of

The other in her mind who makes love and takes

The longing he'll never see in her bedroom eyes.

She thinks of him now as the one who waits.

 

The other in her mind who makes love and takes

Her away from all that she can barely endure,

She thinks of him now as the one who waits

For her to choose between her life and her love.

 

She feels him undressing her with his eyes.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2012-01-27 at 02:03

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Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Thank you for participating in this year's first writing challenge!
2012-02-15


Gunnel André
How sad and how wonderfully put! Thank you!
2012-01-28


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I second Rob. You've knocked it out of the park.
2012-01-28


Rob Graber
Absorbing and sad; great job with the form. Bravo!
2012-01-27