Our never ending poem ∞ *revised*


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Write 1-5 lines, choose yourself the arrangement of rhymes.

*If you don't know how to rhyme:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhyme_scheme

If you are first you may choose the theme after the first one each line should be a logical continuation of the preceding line(s) and/or of the bigger picture

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nter your contribution as a comment below and tomorrow when Our never ending poem will be republished it will include your contribution as well:)!

If you have contributed (today) you will have to wait 24 hours or until someone else adds 1 -4 lines to our never ending poem and then you can contribute again.

 

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Quaint the loud woman's silent sobs,
Refreshing to see her quiet joy.
Oh my dear ones don't you know?
She descried the wooden duck decoy.

Refreshing to see her quiet joy.
Nearby, children gathered round the lake.
She descried the wooden duck decoy
By the water’s edge a solitary drake.

Nearby children gathered 'round the lake,
Casting crusts on the water to entice
By the water's edge a solitary drake
Caught in ripples among the drift ice. 

Casting crusts on the water to entice
To unbind it, it is sufficient to say: 
Caught in ripples among the drift ice. 
Here, is where our demons demise


Behind a white picket fence grown ups hide, 
It keeps more love coming their way away 
Behind a white picket fence grown ups hide, 
Daughters weave wreaths of lotus blossoms 

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Cock a doodle do!
My dame has lost her shoe,
My master's lost his fiddlestick,
And knows not what to do.
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Current contributors in chronological order: Liz Munro, night soul woman, jim, countryfog, night soul woman, cr4ky, night soul woman, jim] 

 

 

 

 

Write 1-4 lines, choose yourself the arrangement of rhymes.

If you are first you may choose the theme after the first one each line should be a logical continuation of the preceding line(s) and/or of the bigger picture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2012-02-12 at 21:46

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
although around his worn out shoes flies kept buzzing
the trainer of the rooster stopped moving stopped bugging
him No more naked heel fights the rooster was free
and quickly hid together with the fowl Scot - free
until the very next dawn ~

Along the shore the ice was paper thin there were small frozen waves with white little fins one little ripple thought:I might be frozen still but circles never stop to grow winter just gives me time to heal minus degrees break the flow of time for the world to stop and think
2012-02-13


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi and thank you for you contribution C-F Haegring, your 4 lines are accepted:

Along the shore the ice was paper thin there were small frozen waves with white little fins one little ripple thought:I might be frozen still but circles never stops to grow winter just gives me time to heal minus degrees breaks the flow of time for the
2012-02-12


C-F Haegring
Along the shore
the ice was paper thin
there were small frozen waves
with white little fins

one little ripple thought:
I might be frozen still
but circles never stops to grow
winter just gives me time to heal

minus degrees breaks the flow of time
for the world to stop and think
one long hibernation dream
for our cores to eat and drink
2012-02-12