Our never ending poem ∞ *revised*
•Write 1-5 lines, choose yourself the arrangement of rhymes.
*If you don't know how to rhyme:
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•Your contribution should be a logical continuation of the preceding line(s) and/or of the bigger picture
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[ Poetic form: Pantoum. Contributors in chronological order: Liz Munro night soul woman, jim, countryfog, night soul woman, cr4ky, night soul woman, jim]
Quaint the loud woman's silent sobs,
Refreshing to see her quiet joy.
Oh my dear ones don't you know?
She descried the wooden duck decoy.
Refreshing to see her quiet joy.
Nearby, children gathered round the lake.
She descried the wooden duck decoy
By the water’s edge a solitary drake.
Nearby children gathered 'round the lake,
Casting crusts on the water to entice
By the water's edge a solitary drake
Caught in ripples among the drift ice.
Casting crusts on the water to entice
To unbind it, it is sufficient to say:
Caught in ripples among the drift ice.
Here, is where our demons demise
Behind a white picket fence grown ups hide,
It keeps more love coming their way away
Behind a white picket fence grown ups hide,
Daughters weave wreaths of lotus blossoms
!
Cock a doodle do!
My dame has lost her shoe,
My master's lost his fiddlestick,
And knows not what to do.
!
Along the shore the ice was paper thin there were small frozen waves with white little fins one little ripple thought:I might be frozen still but circles never stop to grow winter just gives me time to heal minus degrees break the flow of time for the world to stop and think one long hibernation dream for our cores to eat and drink
although around his worn out shoes flies kept buzzing
the trainer of the rooster stopped moving stopped bugging
him No more naked heel fights the rooster was free
and quickly hid together with the fowl Scot - free
until the very next dawn ~
[ Poetic form: Rhyme scheme of choice Current contributors in chronological order: C-F Haegring, night soul woman]
Poetry by Editorial Team
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Written on 2012-02-13 at 00:09
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