by Admiel Kosman (selected as clip of the month on poetryinternationalweb)




THE ONE WHO NEEDS A PSYCHIATRIST



It’s okay to express an opinion. Can’t You
take any criticism? I’ve been there,
and I’m telling You it’s not what You think.
So sit down and be quiet.

Can’t You take any criticism
at all? The way You behave is really ridiculous.
You should think before You speak.

You’re sure You know everything.
But inside, I’m sorry to say,
You’re a miserable creature,

in my opinion, You don’t even know
for sure, inside,
that You exist, and so
You can’t take
any tough criticism at all. 

You should know, it’s okay, yes, really okay
to express an opinion, even if it’s against You, I’m sorry to say.

By the way, You really should know, 
between the two of us
the one who needs a psychiatrist
is You,

not me. It’s true
that I offend You
here and there. So what,
I’m telling You the honest,
bitter truth. So what
if it’s hard for You to swallow.

The distance from this
to Your violent response
is as far as heaven from earth.

It’s interesting that for You, in
Your fantasies, no one
ever opens his mouth. And in
there, inside, it’s like a total hush.

So excuse me, I won’t talk to You now.
Because when You look at me like that

what do You really want to say, look,
You’re terrifying me.

You should know 
I’m not going to talk about that either.
Even though I know very well
You don’t even really mean it.

To me You’ve been a negative
character for a long time, and not at all
human, because You don’t, to my way of thinking,
exist in the real world.

You should know that creatures 
like You, may find, perhaps,
as far as I’m concerned, on an emotional level

or maybe in Your 
dreams, for all I care
You may find
in fantasies

some gnomes or trolls, 
believe me, 
as far as I’m concerned,
they’re giants,

I’m not quarreling with You at all, 
if You haven’t noticed, because, to me, it’s
an insult to intelligence, absolutely. 

By the way, I have to add, really
for Your own good, that the one,
between the two of us, who needs, urgently,
to see a psychiatrist,
is You.

 

 

 

© 2011, Admiel Kosman

 

© Translation: 2011, Lisa Katz
Publisher: First published on PIW, 201

 

Source http://international.poetryinternationalweb.org/

 






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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Sad I think , when all we really need is some one to listan to us. Is that not what a trick cyclist is supposed to do . Instead of looking at the clock behind. Only hearing the clink of conies.
Ken D Williams
2012-02-27


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
I love my psychiatrist and always have.
Luckily for me so far she is called myself.
2012-02-27


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting. Reminds of of Dr Anaterney Clare , who was a top British Psychiatrist. Who had a programe on radio 4.A woman did his cleaning. She killed her self , he was taken totally unaware by what she did .Why she did. He just never notisde her. She was invisible to the good doctor , all knowing psychiatrist.
Ken D Williams
2012-02-27