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For better days...

Take a sweet afternoon
A sense of see-you-soon
An old romantic tune

For better days

In this place pure and true
Between your dreams and you
Is where I drifted to

For better days

With my lost love and friends
The aching heartbreak mends
The final sorrow ends

For better days





Poetry by John-Charles Cooke
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Written on 2012-05-23 at 22:46

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I can hear the tune in my head as I read this. Well written.

Joe
2012-05-24



Another beauty, my friend :-)
I like your rhymes and the hopeful mood of the refrain. I hear nostalgic piano chords for this one, perhaps with a subtle humming interlude.
Applause!
2012-05-24


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
This is good.
Eventually we make our better days.
In a moments darkness :)
2012-05-24