Your imagination and my words blend together into a magic painting

of aliveness and beauty.




A painting with words

 

 

A crackling fire is dancing with beauty

 

On a boundless ocean

 

the moonlight is sparkling with a silvery smile

 

and in the soft whisper of the dark night

 

stars are shining beautifully bright

 

The mighty breathing of the sea

 

is filling the fresh night air with a salty fragrance

 

The alive fire 

 

 a mixture of light and heat

 

 makes the heart with love and tenderness beat

 

 





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-06-10 at 20:06

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A magic painting indeed, dear friend.
Perhaps it is because M'Lady has treated us to hot buttered toast this evening, but I feel a warm glow on reading these lines. More than presenting an image, your words invite us to an uplifting experience, especially in the description of the sea 'breathing' and 'filling'. Quite remarkable.
Applaudeth.
2012-06-10