The river is the Kaskaskia, though Indians called it the Okaw.




What The River Says

 

Is there a way to be gone and still

belong? Travel that takes you home?

Is that life? - to stand by a river and go

William Stafford, "Quo Vadis"

 

 

 

I have always been here, and even

When I was away, long or briefly,

I was always turning and returning,

Knowing the ways back to myself.

 

Once, as a child, I wished to leave,

Finding a path through trees leaning,

Almost falling, to the river, arriving

And passing to the places I would go.

 

And how with a sharp stone I carved

Notches in trees, marking the path

To make it mine and to find it again

When I was older and would follow it.

 

And now the trees are gone, the path

Long lost and there is only the sound

Of the river still saying over and over

Where it was that I might have gone.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2012-07-13 at 18:43

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Morning Star
A sad and reflective piece, with such depth and soulfulness.

This is my favorite too. They probably all are my favorites actually.

Lovely, tender poem.
2012-08-08


Poppy
This spoke to me - what a beautiful strong poem.

Thank You

Poppy ~xx~
2012-07-18


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
These words brought something home for me.

Thanks.
2012-07-15


shells
Some things stay the same or so we would like, but memories can't be erased and you seem to have some precious ones. A lovely piece.
2012-07-15


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Maybe the river is saying only, "This is where you were meant to be." Beautifully written, as always, Fog.
2012-07-14



Pensive indeed, countryfog.
As per usual, there is much to admire in your work, not least the glorious flow throughout these lines, so appropriate to the piece. I have heard the song of many rivers, the endless refrain that so carries one's thoughts. I shall hasten to the Google to learn about the Kaskaskia/Okaw.
Applaudeth.
2012-07-13


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
I liked this
very beautiful
Thanks for sharing
N T
2012-07-13


Rob Graber
Effectively pensive! I grew up along a river; it affects a person, I think...
2012-07-13