It's all over my face and it HURTS!!!!

P.S. I started this over a month ago and I finally finished it! Took me a while, eh?


Sunburn

So this is the cost
for having some fun
A bright red burn
from the Florida sun
It feels like a fever
outside of my head
And yet it is no reason
to stay in my bed
It gives the illusion
of an unending blush
It burns like the feeling of
adrenaline rush
Suddenly I regret
trying to tan
I should've colored myself
with that brown crayon




Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-04-25 at 01:15

Tags Sunburn  Pain  Red 

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Keenan
LOL!

A great little poem!

Very fun to read.

Great job!
2006-05-09


Feiyn
Haha I'm sure the brown crayon would have worked. I hope you feel better. Great poem!
2006-04-26


penfold18
Not much chance of getting one here at the moment,but I like the poem.
2006-04-25


PoeticProcrastination
I agree with cherryfairy! AWESOME POEM! :D

(welcome back, it's been a long time :D)
2006-04-25


CherryFairy
Haha. I'm sorry!!! I hate sunburn with a fiery passion. teehee. fiery. great poem!!! you always have really fun ones!!
2006-04-25