And when the seven thunders had uttered

their voices, I was about to write . . .

        Revelations 10:4




Portent and Poetry

This was to be a psalm about deliverance,

How reprieve can be a kind of resurrection.

 

Month after month of drought, and now

Premonition if not yet revelation of rain,

 

Wind rising along the ridge-line of sere

And serried pines, needles swirling sparks

 

As the sun flares and embers in the ashen

Sky, banked by clouds soot-black and hard

 

As stones, soft thunder the sound they make

Tumbling down the lowering light, rising dust.

 

Somewhere there is rain, someone making

A poem of it, knowing he has words for only

 

A part of it, the few moments of its passage

That he can set down and then must let go,

 

Giving it to the wind and the water, Li Po

Setting his poems adrift on the Yellow River.

 

Here, stones and stream are now a still pool,

Clouds climbing the hill and falling farther

 

On toward the next, silence, rain and poem  

Slipping away beyond my reach and speech.

 

"Seal up those things which the seven thunders

Uttered, and write them not."





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2012-08-12 at 19:50

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful poem, Fog, and, lucky for us, it didn't slip away, though the rain did. (The same thing happened here yesterday. Damn.)
2012-08-14



I hope the portentous clouds brought relief to your area. Here on the North Shore of Long Island, we've gotten a fair share of rain. I'm a rain lover and nothing sounds more soothing to me than the sound of raindrops against the windows. Like the song says 'you don't know what you've lost 'til it's gone.'

William
2012-08-13


Rob Graber
Enjoyed this portentous write; we sure could use some rain where I live...
2012-08-13