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"Oy yuz! what yuz looking at?"

"Yuz a Prat"

"Oy yuz! what's with the stare?"

"Do yuz want me to come over there?"

The bouncers come and throw me out

They shout

"You lout!

into the gutter, with you"

The kerb is soft to me befuddled head

I fall asleep

I dream...

I see a bright light above me

A benign face, but it speaks with a voice like thunder

"Oy you! what are you looking at?"

"You prat"

"Oy you! what's with the stare?"

"Do you want me to come down there

and sort you out?"

"No please don't" I shout

The face ponders a while

and with a smile replies

 

"Well I won't then"





Poetry by Blilith
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Written on 2012-08-21 at 02:16

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
WOW!!!

xxx Stan
2012-09-20


Zalan
An attention-grabbing confrontation with the blithe event... very beautifully crafted, enjoyed going through such a magnum opus..
2012-09-17


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2012-08-22


Joan Black
The poem is nicely rhymed and elaborately composed. Great work!
2012-08-21


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
HI Blilith , good to be reading your again. An interesting work , much to ponder on.
Ken
2012-08-21