poem


no secret

i have tears in my eyes
thinking about the past
but you cannot see them,
i have tears on my face
thinking of you now,
there is no secret that i loved you,
no secret at all .



Poetry by anton roxana
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Written on 2012-11-14 at 20:57

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Rob Graber
Attractive and touching for its directness and simplicity. The progression of the tears from "in my eyes" to "on my face" lends the poem a sad and gentle dynamism. It is not easy to avoid triteness in this kind of write; but it seems to me this one succeeds!
2012-11-14