Presence

 

for Jim

 

 

 

 

I think that there is a spirit of place, a presence asking to be expressed; and sometimes when we are lucky as writers, and quiet in a way few of us want to be anymore, a voice enters our own . . .

- John Haines

 

 

 

Sometimes the woods at night are entered into

By coming just to the edge of what you can hear,

When to go farther would be to enter only almost

Silence, the only sounds your own no matter

How lightly you try to place your two feet where

Four have gone ahead of you so quietly not a leaf

Or branch turns from its place to tell you where.

It is then you stop and then go on into listening,

And if you hold perfectly still, completely there,

An owl will call, or a nighthawk, and soon after

A call within a call deeper in the darkness, not

An answer but the passage of one life entering

Into another, passing into presence, into yours.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2012-12-02 at 19:15

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Morning Star
Very beautiful, profound, and majestic, written I think from the soul or that place of All-That-Is, that exists inside of us.

It held a special resonance for me, today, and so I am so glad that I read your beautiful poem Countryfrog. (Always want to call you Soulfrog, and then remember your screen name--which is also a fine name. I guess because your poems are so soul-based.)

Love
Morning Star
2012-12-04



I am traveling and writing this comment on my damn iPhone, please forgive the brevity. I am touched and honored that such a poem as this was dedicated to me. Thank you.
2012-12-04


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Quieting my own inner voice so as to hear another is my utmost challenge. You have addressed the elusiveness of the exercise beautifully.
2012-12-03