Duality



Hearing about wings of mine,
treading water at every step,
joyfull of hardships,
smiling with sunshine,

you are sad, and, so am I
but you were glad when I was down,
life has its ways to make
everything
upside down

as we are here



Poetry by Ivan R
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Written on 2013-03-09 at 01:05

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Double Wow! I had to read another poem because there is so much soul in your poems, and I am glad I chose this one. You write so directly from the heart that the reader can almost feel it beating. These are sophisticated, deep thoughts. I love this.
~Ashe
2014-02-07


Nina Lee
Wow! That second stanza; most of us are in such a position unknowingly or not. Powerful write quietly explosive with a double shot straight up!
2013-03-09