Eli
I love it.
2013-03-11

She sounds like a peach.

I'm the shy, retiring type, just the thought of her has me looking for the exit.

I like the smoker's voice, though. It humanizes her, shows an imperfection. I mean, besides being a bitch.

Sorry if that's politically incorrect. It seems to sum it up.
2013-03-10

Well developed portrait. The end-rhymes, rarely used by you in your postings here, give it a pleasing ballad-like effect.

William
2013-03-10

Lawrence Beck
Viciously amusing. Apparently, she has met her match.
2013-03-10

josephus
Boy, do I recognise this one! The intellectual bully without a creative thought in her head but all the credintials.
2013-03-10

countryfog
There was a time when I would have almost had to read it (into it) as a commentary on the Women's Movement, Betty Friedan and her cohort of literary harridans who had the unlikely label of 'feminists.' No doubt I am being too hard on them, great things have been achieved in the years since, though I'm not sure it was because of them or in spite of them. I love the delicious double entendre in the second stanza second line, perhaps not intended and only an old man's sense of humor.
2013-03-10

Ivan R
Everything in this poem is a scene,
it is a stage to watch, itś a drama, it is really a thing to watch
2013-03-10

ngaio Beck
Like it or not,it creates a very clear picture. I lke It!
2013-03-10

An excellent poetic scene. Its details jump out from its lines with a very palpable mood & lively detail bursting with secrets & possibilities. Thanks for sharing.
2013-03-09