Scorched

My arms reach for heaven
but my feet are firmly rooted in hell
I'd like to escape the fire
but i'm not doing well
My efforts mean nothing
only suffering will suffice
I'm stuck here
in the depths of the night





Poetry by Leila
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Written on 2013-04-04 at 16:00

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Commentally Ill
so you are a tree. rooted, reaching, and on fire. you would seem to be rather screwed.

don't mind me *snaps off a branch* i just need a bit of kindling.
2013-04-05


workoutrules
oopsy typo,,I meant two lines ;)
2013-04-04


workoutrules
Amazing write,I feel the pain in this,especially the first to lines

"My arms reach for heaven"
but my feet are firmly rooted in hell..

to reach from the deepest corners of your soul
to pen on paper,escaping what eats at the core

Loved this write,,take care

Cyn
2013-04-04