Her Name Was Lucia

And then she lived across the alley

And was beautiful in her five years

In a way no one else has ever been

Because even then I wanted to leave

Behind my innocence and we went

To her garage and lay on the old couch

And I kissed her.

                            She had a seashell

And when she held it for long moments

To her ear and I put my arm around her

To keep her from drifting away she said

She could hear the ocean, though she

Had never gone there, and in all this time

Has never left (because only here do I

Remember her) for all the places I knew

Even then I would go. 

                                   And I come back

To you now to finally listen to what it was

You heard, to tell you here in your staying

That what I came to in my leaving was

So often only wrack and wreckage and

Storm surge, how the oceans were never

Settled places but endless passages and long

Times lost, how all we might wish to leave

Behind and deeply forget surfaces again,

Tell you that all these years I've wished you

Innocence and the soft kiss of a calm sea.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-05-03 at 22:41

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done, Fog, great writing as always. I especially liked,

...what I came to in my leaving was
So often only wrack and wreckage and
Storm surge, how the oceans were never
Settled places but endless passages and long
Times lost, how all we might wish to leave
Behind and deeply forget surfaces again

Agreed.
2013-05-09


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Those of us who became addicted to wandering the world, find solace in the calmness of those who stayed behind and found themselves by looking inward.

I especially relate to your "You heard, to tell you here in your staying That what I came to in my leaving was So often only wrack and wreckage" the price often paid for being a 21st century bedoin.


These are the thoughts that your work here and elsewhere bring to my consciousness.

So well written my friend!

Joe
2013-05-08


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely and excellent. The last two lines are a perfect ending for it. ~
2013-05-04



This is a work of art. *Wow*
2013-05-04