Fallen

Fallen apart.
The suns are raining from the skies,
I don't care anymore, drink their poisonous lies
screaming at the void.
Falling apart
Now I'm drifting at random through the airs
I was never one of theirs

Shattered wings
I'm falling forever

My hate is all that I have left

I am fallen apart.




Poetry by Lalando
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Written on 2006-04-11 at 14:44

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Jon Hanover
When you keep your poems short like this they are ( to me anyways ) easier to take in. I have at times put two or three of my poems together in one suite or compilation. I see the themes in which you write, I also see you right on the edge of making them more complex and deeper. Even though I have a university degree in fine arts every time I approach a surface I am drawing on it is practice to get better. Same thing with poetry, I look back on poems I wrote months ago and will rework them into something better. Do not be afraid to experiment with forms and structure.
2006-04-11