you

the second
you kissed her lips

I sewed mine
onto my hips

licked you
to the bones

hundred and two
burning cones




Poetry by 5072
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Written on 2005-07-31 at 21:43

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
that reads a whole lot better now, yes :)
2005-07-31


5072
thanks ;)
2005-07-31


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a good poem but the second verse reads wrong here with sew, you are in past tense speaking, it needs to be sewed or sewn. that aside it is a nice poem
2005-07-31