Of Geese And Stream Stones

 

Out of this light into a greater light.

    James Still

 

 

 

 

They pass more often now, these last to leave,

Gathering from frosted fringes of pasture ponds,

The cemetery lake where mourners no longer

Linger to feed them, the still stream shallows,

Blending in with gray days and the low clouds,

The deep quiet now the summer birds are gone,

Never at night, but tonight I hear them crossing,

Unseen and more urgency than ever in their calls

And in their calling me to listen to their passage.

 

And then - O and then the ambient light from town

Reaches up and reflects off the white undersides

Of their wings and they slowly circle in it, as though

Both the air and the light were needed to keep them

Lifted, a beacon to fix their bearings before going on,

Twenty-two silver shimmerings swimming the dark

Like fish flashing and feeding in a pool at dusk, or

The way poplars turn the underside of their leaves

Toward the approaching storm.

                                                  

                                                          And now the circle

Wobbles and widens until one by one in a row they

Set out again and here and there houses go dark.

Once I picked up a stream stone and turned it over

And the full moon flared from water-polished mica

And quartz, pinpoints of light and I was holding

A hundred stars in my hand.  I placed the stone

Back in the stream as it was, as I let the geese go

On from here, for someone else to find the light.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-11-18 at 16:31

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done, Fog. I could hear the geese as I read.
2013-11-24


Åsa Andersson
Beautiful and meditative. I liked how you connect the earth (the stone) to the sky (geese) and beyond to the stars.

This past week, I have stopped in my tracks many times to watch V formations of geese on their way south for the winter.
2013-11-20


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Wonderfully descriptive, reflective lines meditating the levels of perceiving the natural realm.
2013-11-20



Quite breathtakingly beautiful, my friend. For some of this morning, I let my eyes rest upon Squire Squirrel, enthusiastic in his winter preparations yet not, perhaps, as majestic as your geese. I like the subtle scene setting of the first verse, followed by wonderment as the geese are illuminated, the careful counting and striking similes that capture so well the moment, and finally, the memory of the stone, bestowing a radiant echo. Applause!
2013-11-18